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BAR/S
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OLD VERSION WITH FIGURES
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PHRASING SUGGESTIONS
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1 - 4
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Bars 1-4
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Introduction - Normal four bar phrase, culminating on 1st
and 2nd beat o bar 4
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5 - 8
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Figure 1 – Figure 2
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EXPOSITION FIRST SECTION =
Another four measure phrase
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9 – 11
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Figure 2 for 3 bars
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3 bars of mixed meters
7/8 7/8
2/4
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12 – 15
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3 before Figure 3
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2 bars of 5/4,
resulting in next phrase starting on 2nd beat
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15 – 22
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Figure 3 for 8 bars
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8 bar phrase beginning one beat out, canons in 18 and 19 still
one beat out but eventually righting itself bar 20/ 2 before 5
with first big
FF
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SECOND SECTION –
more lyrical theme with countersubject
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23 – 26
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Bar after 5 for 4
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4 bar phrase – should the cornet double the oboe? ..or balance?
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26 – 30
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4 before 6
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Answering 4 bar phrase – does it start in 6/8?
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30 – 32
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Figure 6 for 2 bars + 2 beats
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Same theme in woodwind but could now be construed as in 3/8 3/8
3/8 2/8 2/4
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32 – 34
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3 before 7
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Answered in basses possibly in 3/8 3/8 3/8 5/8
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34 – 36
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Pickup to 7 to bar 2
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Firmly and triumphantly triple time breaking into
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37 -40
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6 before Figure 8
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6/8 8/8
8/8
NB the 8/8 bars
are each 3 + 3 + 2
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41 – 43
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3 before Figure 8
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Starting on the upbeat two bars of 5/4 embracing canons in ¾
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44 – 47
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1 after 8 for 4 bars
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Theme back in triple time, then 6/8 then 2 bars triple but note
the canon – NB I ask syncopated 8ths to be tenuto
- hear difference
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48 - 53
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3 bars before 9 – 3 bars after 9
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Main theme stated in augmentation –
second big FF which
sets up a great six bar diminuendo to molto pp accompagnato
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From 51
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Figure 9
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DEVELOPMENT FIRST SECTION
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54 – 57
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4th of Figure 9
- 10
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7 bar phrase built of a 4 bar and an answering 3 bar – I invite
3rd clart, alto sax, horns and euphonium to take a
really low mf/p
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61 – 64
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Figure 10 for 4 bars
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Texture is thicker for this 2 bar phrase answered by 2 bars so
again I invite all soloists to think piano and to blend
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65 – 68
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4 before 11
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Normal 4 bars of two 2 bar phrases – not an important forte
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69 – 71
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Figure 11 for 2 bars
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Phrase overlaps into the third bar , basically 3/4. + 8/8
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71 – 74
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3 bars + 2 beats before 12
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One bar of 5/4 followed by 2 bars of 6/8
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75 – 78
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Figure 12 for 4 bars
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Modulatory passage
in E major – feel of 2/4 – Revelli “notes not quite touching”
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78 – 84
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6 before Figure 13
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Two bars of 5/4 followed by 3 bars of 3/4 ….
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85 – 90
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Figure 13 – 14
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Two bars of 5/4 followed by two bars of triple time
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DEVELOPMENT SECOND SECTION
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90-93
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Figure 14 for 3 bars
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Lowest point – very difficult to get it pp and with clarity
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94-95
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2 before 15
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F# Minor 2 bar
phrase Low point mf
but tutti p or pp
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96-99
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Figure 15
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A minor 4 bar phrase
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100-102
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6 before 16 for 2 bars
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7/8 5/8
and a triple bar
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103- 105
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3 before 16
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5/4 bar followed by
4/4
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106-108
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Figure 16 for 3 bars
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3 bars of canons
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109-16
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8 before 18
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Eight bar phrase ending on Figure 18, imitation moving through
wide range of keys – very hard to control crescendo
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RECAPITULATION
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116-120
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End of 18 – 5th bar
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Reprise of second theme
from Bar 22 – 26, Figure 5, this time fortissimo instead
of piano -
PENULTIMATE FF
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120-124
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Bar after 18 for 4 bars
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Answering 4 bar phrase – does it start in 6/8?
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124 - 138
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Figure 19 – 4th measure of
20
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These fourteen bars are an exact repeat of
Figure 6 – Figure 8,
30 - 44
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138-146
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4th of 20 to 21
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6+ 3 bars phrase,
beginning triple time – 8/8 – 6/8, canon extended sequentially –
2/4 2/4 and four bars of triple time.
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CODA
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147-152
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Figure 21
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Six bars of triple time or nine bars of 2/4
– ostinato on Gb with canonic a in Gb – D
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153-156
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5 bars before the end
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Two bars of 2/4 whole tone scale over an augmented 5th
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157
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2 measures before end
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16th notes for two beats and final statement of main
motif
FINAL AND BIGGEST FF
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Bar no.
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Figure
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Bar
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Problem
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Bar 4
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1
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1 before
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Staccato omitted in brass upbeat
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Bar 8
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2
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1 before
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Bassoons lines omitted
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Bar 8
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2
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1 before
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Tenor saxophone last note should be F not A
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Bar 11
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2
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3 after
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Crescendo notated 1 beat too early
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Bar 17
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3
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3 after
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Side Drum Crescendo omitted
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Bar 18
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3
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4 after
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3rd clarinet wrong notes 2nd
eighth note should be D natural, 6th should be Bb
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Bar 22
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5
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All parts diminuendo should be from 2nd eighth note
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Bar 22
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5
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Bassoon 1 should be piano not mf
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Bar 25
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5
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4 after
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All parts crescendo should be last beat, not whole bar
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Bar 26
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6
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4 before
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2nd Clarinet has no note in this bar – col cornet 2
starts in the next bar in the original score
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Bar 32
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6
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3 after
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Oboe 4th semi should be E natural 7th
and 9th Eb
Score has
E natural throughout_
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Bar 32
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6
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3 after
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Clarinet 2 4th semi should be F#. 7th
and 9th F natural
(Score has F# throughout)
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Bar 32
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6
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3 after
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Trumpet should have F# not natural
(Score has F natural)
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7
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1 before
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Bass trombone, euphonium and tuba slur from second sixteenth ote
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Bars 37/38
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7
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Bars 3 -4
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Basses should be legato 2nd & 3rd and 5th
and 6th eighth notes
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Bar 38
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7
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4th after
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Triangle rhythm should be quarter note eighth note
rest quarter note eighth note rest
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Bars 39/40
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7
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Bars 5 & 6
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Basses should be legato 4th and 5th and
then first 2 eighth notes
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Bar 43
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8
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1 before
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Bassoons editorial addition of upbeat Ab
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Bar 45
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8
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2nd bar
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Crescendo eighth note early
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Bar 48
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9
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3 before
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Timpani and Percussion forte not ff
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Bar 50
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9
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1 before
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Diminuendo eighth note too early
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Bar 51
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9
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4th Horn should have a D instead of
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Bar 51
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9
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Cornets piano first beat
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Bar 53
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9
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3 after
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Tutti diminuendo last quarter note
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Bar 54
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9
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4th bar
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Tuba first eighth note is G
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Bar 64
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10
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2nd bassoon legato ends on 2nd beat of 4th
bar
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Bar 60
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10
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1 before
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Dimuendo from beat 1
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Bar 65
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10
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5 after
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Trombone 1 should be D not C
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Bar 67
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10
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7 after
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Trombone 1 tacet for 1 bar
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Bar 68
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11
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1 before
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Alto saxophone should be tacet for 1 bar
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Bar 69
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11
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Second bassoon starts on 1st beat with a D
eighth note
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Bar 75
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12
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Clarinet phrasing wrong for 4 bars
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Bar 75
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12
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Bass trombone should be B not G
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Bar 82
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13
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3 before
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Second bassoon should have B natural not Bb
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Bar 84
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13
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1 before
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1st clarinet second eighth note should be
G# not Gb
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Bar 91
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14
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Trombone second entry should be p not pp
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Bar 91
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14
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Tubas should be p not pp though euphonium is pp
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Bar 95
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15
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1 before
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Upper woodwind diminuendo should be last quarter note
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Bar 103
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16
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3 before
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Cornet 1 should be Bb not G
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Bar 103
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16
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3 before
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Side drum add ruff before bar
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Bar 111
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17
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1 before
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Oboe an octave too low
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Bar 111
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17
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1 before
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Tubas omit 2nd eighth note
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Bar 113
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17
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2nd bar
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Trombones crescendo last quarter note
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Bar 114
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18
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2 before
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2nd clarinet should play eighth note F# then 2 eighth
note rests
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Bar 121
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19
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3 before
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Timps should have eighth note on 1st beat followed by
2 eighth note rests
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Bar 124
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19
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1st cornet should be E not G
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Bar 124
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19
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4th horn should have 2 bars of dotted half
note A, as at 6
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Bar 123
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19
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1 before
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2nd cornet should have C# not natural
according to piano score
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Bar 137
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20
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3rd bar
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Bassoons insert Ab anacrusis
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Bar 147
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21
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Clarinet should diminuendo on last quarter note
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From 155
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End
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Last 3 bars
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Eb clarinet, oboe, both saxes and 1st clarinet
phrasing could be changed to fit the original
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Bar 155
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End
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3 before
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Side drum should have crescendo
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Bar 158
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End
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Cymbals stroke missing
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